1. The stars in the sky
2. Align with the old brick house
3. The chimney huffs smoke
4. the mantle decorated
5. with bright red stockings
6. Hanging tall with excitement
7. Awaiting for him
8. are the plates of cookies and milk
9. The pine tree lights up
10. For what he can bring for them.
11.The next morning wakes
12. Excitment comes over the kids
13. The gifts rip open
14. Screams of happiness are heard
15. What a success that
16. will last till next holiday
17. smiles and joyfulness
18. are filled in the old brick house
19. For tradition lasts
20. And will be past down forever.
Dear Kelly/kthots/big hits/la fifi,
ReplyDeleteI liked the theme of your poem which reflects christmas morning and all the things that go on.
I also enjoyed your the form of HAIKU you used with the 5-7-5 rhythm:
The stars in the sky
Align with the old brick house
The chimney huffs smoke
PS: YOUR SEWWWWW GOOOD AT POEM WRITING